Lolly Poem

Hey bloggers,

have you ever heard of lollies, of course you have but have you ever made up a poem about lollies? Well that’s exactly what I’m going to be doing!

Lollies, from sour to sweet,

that come across being a treat!

The perfect thing is smarties,

for when you go to parties!

Give your lolly-pop a lick,

and don’t worry you won’t get sick.

You will always love jelly beans,

even when your in your teens.

So now you see how lollies are great,

you can serve them for dinner on your plate!

So……what did you think of my lolly poem?

Please comment and tell me what your favourite part of my poem is!

Thanks, Tess 🙂

9 thoughts on “Lolly Poem

  1. Hi,
    I love this poem. It really made me want some candy! My favorite part was when you said you could serve them for dinner!


  2. Hey Tessa
    How are you?
    Nice poem about lollies.
    It makes me want them right now.
    My favourite bit was when you said the perfect thing is smarties. You always need to be smart.
    Nice poem!
    Cool curser too!
    Ashling 🙂

    • Hello Ashling!
      Thanks for your comment!
      I am well thank-you, how are you?
      I love that part about the smarties, especially because I love smarties!
      My curser…..THANK-YOU, it is pretty cool, isn’t it?
      Tess 🙂

  3. Hi Tessa,

    I only wish it was my fate
    To have sweet lollies on my plate!
    Though I fear I won’t be thinner,
    If I’m served them for my dinner.

    Mrs Y

  4. Hi Tess, (A.K.A Claudia!!)
    I know this late but I hope you reply.
    I loved every bit of your poem,
    but my favourite bit was the part about the lolly pop!
    How did you think of doing it about lollies??

    Ava G 🙂

  5. Hey Ava!
    Sorry this is such a late reply! But thanks for your comment. I really like writing poems and I love lollies, so I found it quite fun making up a poem on lollies!
    Do you have a blog? If yes, what’s it called so maybe sometime I can visit!
    Tess 🙂

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *